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Number | Line / Reference | Proposed Change or Query | Proposer |
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1 | N/A | The PDF appears to lack line numbers, so that may complicate the feedback here. | Fixed Scott Cantor - my bad, sorry (NH). |
2 | End of pg 4 | Nit, suggest you s/SAML 1.0/SAML 1.0 and 1.1 for completeness. | |
3 | Page 5 | Nit, s/intent/intend | |
4 | Footnote 15 | Nit, s/subjected/subject | |
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