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| comment # | Line/Reference # (please indicate which document is referenced too - e.g. EC line 1, BP line 1) | Proposed Change or Query | Proposer / Affiliation |
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| 1 | 6 | I find the opening line a little confusing since the service provider may choose to commit to more rules than just the ones in this framework. "This Code of Conduct sets the rules that Service Provider Organisations can commit to when they..." -> I would suggest a slight change to "This Code of Conduct defines a set of rules that…" | Hannah Short/CERN |
| 2 | General | Since the Code of Conduct is really about expressing compliance with GDPR I wonder whether the title of the entity category and framework shouldn't be clearer and refer to the fact that it's about GDPR and not a more general Code of Conduct? | Hannah Short/CERN |
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